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Post by jennelyn021 on Jan 6, 2014 8:08:47 GMT -5
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Post by model101pose on Jan 6, 2014 11:23:53 GMT -5
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Post by funfun683 on Jan 6, 2014 22:59:24 GMT -5
Judging
Group 1
Chiharu-Jenny-Alessandra-So-Ra-Senait
The first people I look at in this shot are Chiharu, Jenny and So-Ra. You three really did the best in this photo. First with Chiharu, I really love this photo of you. I love the stillness of the pose combined with your expression, it really creates a story. I see an uncertainty of the future in your face and it works so well, you got into character very well. Jenny, I am amazed at how well you can transform, I love this photo. It has such a creepy gothic vibe that just works really well with the setting, I love the intense expression and your scrunched up pose works with the mood you were going for. Alessandra, I just felt like you didnt get into character. I like the intensity in the face but it just feels like your posing and doing something fierce, instead of embodying the theme. I would have really like to have seen you go from a glamour girl to something edgy in this shoot. So-Ra, you also did very well, much better than last week. I love the masculine pose and there is something a bit dreamy about your facial expression, though I would have liked to have seen something more intense, you were posing like a pro in your film but the face was a bit off in some shots, but still very well done. And finally Senait, I was disapointed. Like Alessandra you didnt get into character for me, you werent really styled correctly in some frames or your expressions just didnt really go with the theme. This was the only frame where you actually got close to the theme, but its sort of boring. You look good but you look the least exciting in the group.
Group 2
John-Liah-Ashley-Edie
I really like this whole shot you guys. The only one a bit out of place is Ashley. Anyways, starting with Edie. You stuck out the most to me at first, probably because your the only one standing. You have this boyish Oliver Twist thing going on and I love it, I think you really know how to work your features in a photograph and I just love how it photographs here, you really know how to own your quirkiness. Following Edie my eyes move to John. John you were AMAZING on that set. Your styling was on point and you truly embodied your character. I think you are giving off this vibe of reckless abandon but also worry, its a mix of emotions and thats exactly what I wanted you guys to portray with your characters. Liah, this is so strong. Your expression is so haunting, but not in a scary way like Jenny's, its more sad and emotive. I could see the struggle of your character through your face and pose, amazing job. Finally Ashley, what I said earlier about being out of place is that I felt everyone portrayed so much emotion and melancholy, and your being really edgy instead. I love the rebellious runaway look, but it doesn't add up as much in the whole group shot. But the group did quite good overall.
Group 3
Robyn-Sasha-Leila-Stef
Robyn, you really stood out to me the most out of the group. I love your face and the movement in this shot. You are giving off this vibe of freedom but also pain, you are definitely the star of the shot for me. Stef, this is another strong photo. If Robyn's photo is that of freedom yours is the more serious counterpart, I love the intensity and mystery in your expression and how its opposite of Robyn's. So now to Sasha and Leila in the middle, I kinda have the same critique for both of you. Great, great photos, but not completely amazing. Sasha I like the intensity in your face but something about the arms is a little awkward, Leila, I like you slightly better. You kinda look like a junkie, but it works with the theme and actually is quite good. I just don't like the way your hand is on your face, it's too awkward. I have the same critiques for your films, both great, but nothing that stood out as amazing. |
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Post by funfun683 on Jan 7, 2014 0:07:51 GMT -5
Expulsion Ceremony
Lara: Hello everyone! So this week you all did a photoshoot in which you portrayed runaway teens, and the results were quite amazing. Most of you performed very well and very few scored below 9. As you know the GROUP which did the best will be completely safe, and to decide that I calculated and averaged the scores of everyone on your group, so the group that did the best is...
Group 2!
Which means Edie, John, Liah and Ashley you are all safe! John, you had my favorite shot this week, amazing job, and in order of how well you did in the group Edie you are next, followed by Liah, and Ashley.
John
5+5=10
Photo: A
Couture: A
Liah
4.5+5=9.5
Photo: B+
Couture: B+
Edie
4.5+5=9.5
Photo: B+
Couture: B+
Ashley
3.5+5=8.5
Photo: C+
Couture: C+
Alright then, from this point on I will call you individually.
Chiharu
4.5+5=9.5
Photo: B+
Couture: B+
Well done Chiharu, congratulations!
Jenny
4.5+5=9.5
Photo: B+
Couture: B+
If this was a normal call out, John, Chiharu and yourself would have been the top 3. Well done!
Robyn!
Robyn
4+5=9
Photo: B
Couture: B
Stef!
4+5=9
Photo: B
Couture: B
So-Ra
4+5=9
Photo: B
Couture: B
Leila
3.5+5=8.5
Photo: C+
Couture: C+
Sasha
3.5+5=8.5
Photo: C+
Couture: C+
Will Alessandra and Senait please step forward?
Alessandra, last week you were in your element and delivered a strong glamour shot, but this week when you had to be edgy you failed to rise to the occasion. Senait, last week you were only in the bottom two because someone had to be, you still did good, but this week you are here for delivering a poor performance on set. So who stays? The GPA's have been calculated.
Alessandra (1.1)
3.5+4=7.5
Photo: C+
Couture: C
Senait (1.0)
3+4=7
Alessandra, congratulations, you get another chance.
Senait, you were very close, mainly because you scored grades in 3 subjects last week, however it wasn't enough. I am sorry, but you have been expelled. *hugs her* |
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Post by chachachatham2 on Jan 7, 2014 0:49:15 GMT -5
John: Hellll yeah, thank you!  Senait: *starts sobbing instantly*  Chiharu: *looks at Senait*   |
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Post by ashley on Jan 7, 2014 1:42:01 GMT -5
Steff: when her group does not win  |
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Post by funfun683 on Jan 7, 2014 1:46:34 GMT -5
*The final 12 are picked up by a limo outside of the loft, once they arrive at their destination they realize it is a set for a runway show, backstage they are all greeted by Lara*
Lara: Hello everyone! This week as you can see you will be participating in a runway show. Well sort of. Its more like a runway Face-Off. You will actually be walking the runway in pairs of two! There are no requirements for styling the only thing I ask is that you deliver your strongest walk. But there is a catch. Since you will be walking in pairs you are in fact competing against each other, and the one who does the best out of the two will remain SAFE for elimination. Which means that those at risk for elimination will be the ones who lose in their dual. And one more thing. You get to PICK who you will be walking against. *everyones looks around at each other nervously* So everyone head into hair and make up as the show will be starting in about an hour or two. Goodluck everyone!
Its first come first serve to pick a parter, but, you must post your stuff at the same time, so no picking partners and then waiting to post the runway stuff. Also no videos, just photos, a screencap of a video I will accept though.
Grades
-Runway
(I am updating grades now as well)
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Post by bdon17 on Jan 7, 2014 2:08:31 GMT -5
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Post by bdon17 on Jan 7, 2014 2:11:43 GMT -5
Jenny: *Confessional* I haven't seen anyone practicing their walk, so I'm not really sure who is strong and who isn't. I know I'm not the strongest runway girl in the house, so I wanted to choose someone who was worse than me and I feel like Lara doesn't really like So Ra, so I chose her.
Robyn: *Confessional* I'm clearly not going to be a runway model because I'm not a pre-pubescent boy, so I just hope that Ashley sucks...
Liah: *Confessional* I just don't really like runway and when I don't like something, bitch you better let me win or IMA CUT YOU.
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Post by chachachatham2 on Jan 7, 2014 2:22:14 GMT -5
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Post by model101pose on Jan 7, 2014 9:32:10 GMT -5
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Post by pieceofme on Jan 7, 2014 12:56:09 GMT -5
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Post by ashley on Jan 7, 2014 17:08:48 GMT -5
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Post by jennelyn021 on Jan 11, 2014 18:35:25 GMT -5
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Post by funfun683 on Jan 11, 2014 21:01:01 GMT -5
Judging
Alessandra Vs Chiharu
So you ladies were the first to go up agaisn't each other and you did not make this easy for me. Alessandra, you look so glamorous, confident and sexy on the runway. I was really impressed, and Chiharu you just look like such a pro. You have this steely, confident gaze and were just working the whole look. I think you both looked amazing, but one of you did better so the winning girl from this pair is
Chiharu!
Ashley Vs Robyn
Neither of you are going to be runway regulars, due to size and height respectively. But I think you guys held your own. Ashley you managed to look confident and I thought you had a good strut going on, you dont look as tall as I would have liked you too though. Robyn, I really liked your walk, the dress looked great on you and you were poised, elegant and also confident. So the winner is
Robyn!
Edie Vs Sasha
I thought you did a good job on the runway Edie but I felt you looked a bit timid, on the runway you really want to look in control, but you didnt really have a lot of presence. Sasha, you were one of the best on the runway! I loved the elegance and confidence you had, that dress swayed to your body perfectly and you just looked like you owned the runway. With that being said, this one is a bit obvious.
Sasha!
Jenny Vs So-Ra
Jenny, I loved your expression coming down the runway and the wind in the hair and how its all captured in this shot, but I think you had a tendency to look stiff in the body, but well done either way. So-ra, I thought you had such a great strut and control over your body. You looked very sleek and chic coming down that runway and though I dont really like the outfit you made it work and look decent. So the winner is
So-ra!
John Vs Stef
I really enjoyed watching you two go down the runway, you both had so much intensity. John, you have such a current look and I could just see you fitting in with any male model on the runways, you were a natural on there. Stef, you had so much power on that runway and same as John, I could see you fitting in with current working models. This was another close one.
John!
Leila Vs Liah
You both were probably my least favorite on the runway. Leila, I dont think the dress looked very flattering on you, and when you walked you did something weird with your shoulders that just made them look very broad and unflattering. As a model its your job to make an outfit work. But I thought you at least had a good facial expression. Liah, I was a little surprised, I dont know why but I saw you as a runway girl, but you just looked really bleh up there. You werent making the outfit look flattering and it's one thing to give model like intensity (Robyn, John, Stef), but your expression looked more like you were upset/mad. Its a close one, mainly because you both had mediocre performances. The winner is
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